tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2241656806550205907.post8892172470037549645..comments2023-08-20T03:39:24.195-04:00Comments on paper-n-soul: Haiku My Heartpaper-n-soulhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17003641513663962692noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2241656806550205907.post-73440796337634572422010-07-16T19:10:01.638-04:002010-07-16T19:10:01.638-04:00Beautiful!Beautiful!Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15941415622199071141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2241656806550205907.post-86916680696270563802010-07-10T10:16:08.051-04:002010-07-10T10:16:08.051-04:00Rebecca, just a note: This is a photo of the Lake ...Rebecca, just a note: This is a photo of the Lake Superior shoreline - a sizable pond. ;) Darn chilly, too! <br /><br />Thank you for the sentiment - sounds lovely to me, too.paper-n-soulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17003641513663962692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2241656806550205907.post-62951831948805213432010-07-10T09:52:34.120-04:002010-07-10T09:52:34.120-04:00Thank you so much, everyone, for all the kind word...Thank you so much, everyone, for all the kind words. I have since edited the haiku (of course ;) and it now reads: <br /><br />ribbons gently caress<br />the shore...<br />belie the brewing tempest<br /><br />Small change, but I'm happier with it. I was in a hurry to get it posted yesterday and it just didn't feel quite right.<br /><br />I'm glad to be sharing this journey with like-minded souls.paper-n-soulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17003641513663962692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2241656806550205907.post-70364018923997162922010-07-10T09:25:32.456-04:002010-07-10T09:25:32.456-04:00Beautiful photo, especially the treatment of the e...Beautiful photo, especially the treatment of the edges. The words are beautiful too. They seem natural. Thanks for sharing with us.<br /><br />Peace.Spadomanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17781369901345409341noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2241656806550205907.post-42047467849422529152010-07-09T23:57:37.925-04:002010-07-09T23:57:37.925-04:00O how magical - image and verse! Your haiku is alm...O how magical - image and verse! Your haiku is almost hypnotic!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2241656806550205907.post-9556169278263891752010-07-09T23:12:41.683-04:002010-07-09T23:12:41.683-04:00This is beautiful, the image and the poem.This is beautiful, the image and the poem.Umahttp://umaathreya.blogsome.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2241656806550205907.post-67700466159477683162010-07-09T20:28:15.737-04:002010-07-09T20:28:15.737-04:00this makes me want to dive into a deep pond...and ...this makes me want to dive into a deep pond...and stay there until night fall.<br />beautiful...thank you.rebeccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05265802752790310923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2241656806550205907.post-6519500995242550522010-07-09T16:32:46.133-04:002010-07-09T16:32:46.133-04:00Beautiful image and words. I do like your minimali...Beautiful image and words. I do like your minimalist approach! I will have to visit you again. **blows kisses** DebDeborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12195623810400107239noreply@blogger.com