Beautiful image and words. I do like your minimalist approach! I will have to visit you again. **blows kisses** Deb
this makes me want to dive into a deep pond...and stay there until night fall.beautiful...thank you.
This is beautiful, the image and the poem.
O how magical - image and verse! Your haiku is almost hypnotic!
Beautiful photo, especially the treatment of the edges. The words are beautiful too. They seem natural. Thanks for sharing with us.Peace.
Thank you so much, everyone, for all the kind words. I have since edited the haiku (of course ;) and it now reads: ribbons gently caressthe shore...belie the brewing tempestSmall change, but I'm happier with it. I was in a hurry to get it posted yesterday and it just didn't feel quite right.I'm glad to be sharing this journey with like-minded souls.
Rebecca, just a note: This is a photo of the Lake Superior shoreline - a sizable pond. ;) Darn chilly, too! Thank you for the sentiment - sounds lovely to me, too.